[couldn't make sense of the last so... The grammar gods are crying ---- could we please indent; this is not a business letter but GREAT ART.]
______ An agony-laden moan interrupted the scene - it was coming from the pile of beaten up grunts on the floor. "You got the wrong ones this time, Mao!", one of the men angrily shouted in Jerry's aunt's direction, "the Alpha Brigade is already on their way towards the city hall, the explosion was only a decoy. And you straight fell for it, muhahahaha!!" But then Lynn Mao jumped down from her perch and turned towards Jerry. "Well my boy" she quieried "has your brain been moving quicker than your hands or are we in trouble?"
Sorry Isaiah! Just came back from a vacation...brain is slow to recover...
_______An agony-laden moan interrupted the scene - it was coming from the pile of beaten up grunts on the floor. "You got the wrong ones this time, Mao!", one of the men angrily shouted in Jerry's aunt's direction, "the Alpha Brigade is already on their way towards the city hall, the explosion was only a decoy. And you straight fell for it, muhahahaha!!" But then Lynn Mao jumped down from her perch and turned towards Jerry. "Well my boy" she quieried "has your brain been moving quicker than your hands or are we in trouble?" Faster than lightning, she grabbed him by the arm and took off, heading to the storm clouds gathering above.
[Feels like the Lord of the Rings.... --- I can't wait...]
So, she can ... fly? O_o
Is she a human?
An agony-laden moan interrupted the scene - it was coming from the pile of beaten up grunts on the floor. "You got the wrong ones this time, Mao!", one of the men angrily shouted in Jerry's aunt's direction, "the Alpha Brigade is already on their way towards the city hall, the explosion was only a decoy. And you straight fell for it, muhahahaha!!" But then Lynn Mao, the famed Human Tornado, jumped from her stand and grabbed Jerry by his wrist. "Well, my boy" she queried "has your heart ever beat that hard that you thought it would leap out of your mouth the next moment?"
"Auntie, I don't underst ..."
With her unoccupied hand she performed some fancy, lightning-fast hand movements and mumbled something in Japanese ... and both of them were catapulted up by an invisible force, as if shot by a huge slingshot, heading to the storm clouds gathering above. That was the moment when Jerry passed out.
[my take on the last paragraphs]
With her unoccupied hand she performed some fancy, lightning-fast hand movements and mumbled something in Japanese ... and both of them were catapulted up by an invisible force, as if shot by a huge slingshot, heading to the storm clouds gathering above. That was the moment when Jerry passed out. When he came to, he was dressed in exquisite Japanese armor and armed with two katanas.